Correction in sentence lead to /lead in

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Which of the following is correct ?

1. if you drive fast , it could lead in tracking and /monitoring of your car

2. 1. if you drive fast , it could lead to track and monitor of your car
 

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You should know that both are not correct due to the same mistakes that teachers keep repeating time and again.

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can anyone please correct?
 

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You may firstly correct the mistakes in capitalization and punctuation.

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Just I need correction in the word red below please

1. If you drive fast , it could
lead in tracking and /monitoring of your car.

2. If you drive fast , it could lead to track and monitor of your car.
 

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Neither one makes sense to me.
 

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The OP may mean that the car will be tracked and monitored by speed cameras.

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We don't put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark. Please edit post #5 with that in mind.
 

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The OP may mean that the car will be tracked and monitored by speed cameras.

In that case, I would use something like this to keep as close as possible to the original wording:

If you drive too fast , it could lead to the tracking and monitoring of your car/your car being tracked and monitored.
 
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