Diary - Recently, my taste has changed a lot.

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Recently, my taste has changed a lot. I used to unlike spicy food but now I love them a lot!. I like to eat curry. When I eat dumplings, I always add chili sauce. I've also found that I can tolerate spicier food with time. Also, I used to find avocados disgusting. That creamy and greeny textures made me want to throw up. Now, I love avocados!
 
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Recently, my taste has changed a lot. I used to dislike spicy food but now I love them a lot!. I like to eat curry. When I eat dumplings, I always add chili sauce. I've also found that I can tolerate spicier food with time. Also, I used to find avocados disgusting. That creamy and greeny textures made me want to throw up. Now, I love avocados!
 
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Recently, my taste has changed a lot. I used to dislike spicy food but now I love them a lot!. I like to eat curry. When I eat dumplings, I always add chili sauce. I've also found that I can tolerate spicier food with time. Also, I used to find avocados disgusting. That creamy and greeny textures made me want to throw up. Now, I love avocados!

Maybe you can say "their" instead of "that".

A good phrase that you can use here is "develop a taste for".


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You can say this: I wasn't fond of spicy foods, but I've developed a taste for them.
 
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