Narkises
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 29, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello,
I am translating a real story to English. I need your help and corrections. As I do it little by little, I send you a little each time.
Thank you in advance.
"Hello and Salavat to the caravan which is approaching Hussain's Karbala (it's a place) every moment.
After 40 days of estrangement, separation, pain, wound, scourge, threat and insult, the caravan is coming back to Karbala; an exultant caravan which is not similar to when it left Karbala, at all."
:shock:
I am translating a real story to English. I need your help and corrections. As I do it little by little, I send you a little each time.
Thank you in advance.
"Hello and Salavat to the caravan which is approaching Hussain's Karbala (it's a place) every moment.
After 40 days of estrangement, separation, pain, wound, scourge, threat and insult, the caravan is coming back to Karbala; an exultant caravan which is not similar to when it left Karbala, at all."
:shock:
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