[Grammar] Humans invoke me when their soul is anguish and suffers for love

Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Humans invoke me when their soul is anguish and suffers for love. And when I decide it´s fair, I bring to them help in love and marriage. I know that your soul is suffering like Prometheus unchained. I am here to bring you an important message from the wise ancient Gods of Olympus."

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Dear Rover_KE

I wrote those sentences.

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Humans invoke me when their souls [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are feeling the anguish and suffering of [STRIKE]s for[/STRIKE] love. And when I decide it's fair, I bring to them help in love and marriage. I know that your soul is suffering like Prometheus unchained. I am here to bring you an important message from the wise ancient Gods of Olympus.
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