I will buy a new powerbank to my young borther for celebrating the Christmas

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I'm writing with myself about my daily.

Is the following sentence correct and natural?

I will buy a new powerbank to my young borther for celebrating the Christmas.
 

tedmc

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I'm writing with myself about my daily journal.

Is the following sentence (written by me) correct and natural?

I will buy/am buying a new power (space required) bank to for my young brother for celebrating the Christmas.
I don't think there are second-hand power banks for sale.
 

emsr2d2

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I don't think there are second-hand power banks for sale.
Are you talking specifically about China or in general? I can assure you it's really easy to buy a second-hand one in the UK.
 

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Is the following sentence correct and natural after re-writing.

I will buy a powerbank to my young brother for Christmas.
 

emsr2d2

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Look at the corrections tedmc made in post #2 of this thread. You've made at least one of the errors again.
 
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