[General] IELTS writing

[Alluringlass]

I was wonder if one could help me with designing a map writing of the suggested idea.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.​

Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?​

 

[5jj]

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