Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please correct my grammar and punctuation in the following sentences?
1. As the child neared the cage, the bear grunted and stood upright. Frightened, the child ran back to her mother.
2. The old woman stood in the park throwing pieces of food to a flock of ducks, which quacked excitedly.
3. As I read a book in my bed, I caught the click of the lock of my entrance door, and I froze with fear.
4. Peter had a predilection for blondes since he was a teenager, but ended up marrying a woman with dark hair.
5. It was a sunny Sunday, and I walked down the street lined with beautiful gardens emanating the scents of flowers and blossoms.
6. The woman had long-fingered hands, like a pianist, covered in thin bluish veins.
7. The rain was slicing down and made the old drainpipes rattle.
8. After losing his case, John was so upset when he left the court that he collided with a few passers-by without bothering to say sorry.
9. The paramedics arrived at the scene of the accident within minutes and immediately started to give first aid. It was almost impossible to concentrate on their task amidst all the cries and howls of the dozens of injured passengers.
10. The candle on the table sputtered and went out, leaving the room in semi-darkness. The moonlight fell through the window spilling its light over the floor.
1. As the child neared the cage, the bear grunted and stood upright. Frightened, the child ran back to her mother.
2. The old woman stood in the park throwing pieces of food to a flock of ducks, which quacked excitedly.
3. As I read a book in my bed, I caught the click of the lock of my entrance door, and I froze with fear.
4. Peter had a predilection for blondes since he was a teenager, but ended up marrying a woman with dark hair.
5. It was a sunny Sunday, and I walked down the street lined with beautiful gardens emanating the scents of flowers and blossoms.
6. The woman had long-fingered hands, like a pianist, covered in thin bluish veins.
7. The rain was slicing down and made the old drainpipes rattle.
8. After losing his case, John was so upset when he left the court that he collided with a few passers-by without bothering to say sorry.
9. The paramedics arrived at the scene of the accident within minutes and immediately started to give first aid. It was almost impossible to concentrate on their task amidst all the cries and howls of the dozens of injured passengers.
10. The candle on the table sputtered and went out, leaving the room in semi-darkness. The moonlight fell through the window spilling its light over the floor.