Notice

Status
Not open for further replies.

yslamac

Member
Joined
Jan 24, 2014
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Hong Kong
Current Location
Hong Kong
Below is a notice written by the management office of my estate. Please improve it. Thank you.:)


At around 8pm, a serious incident of throwing object from height took place. A green wine glass bottle was thrown from high level floor. The bottle had broken into pieces scattering on the open space in front of the building entrance. Luckily, nobody was injured. The case has been reported to the police for investigation with a view to locating the suspect for judgement, Please be reminded that throwing object from height is a criminal offence and would also be subject to allotment of marks under the Marking Scheme. Also, for the safety of the public, please do not commit this crime.
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
Below is a notice written by the management office of my estate. Please improve it. Thank you.:)


At around 8pm, a serious incident [STRIKE]of throwing object from height[/STRIKE] took place. A green wine [STRIKE]glass[/STRIKE] bottle was thrown from a high [STRIKE]level[/STRIKE] floor. The bottle [STRIKE]had broken[/STRIKE] smashed, [STRIKE]into pieces[/STRIKE] scattering [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] all over the open space in front of the building entrance. Luckily, nobody was injured. The case has been reported to the police for investigation with a view to identifying and locating the suspect. [STRIKE]for judgement,[/STRIKE] Please be reminded that throwing objects from [STRIKE]height[/STRIKE] above is a criminal offence and perpetrators [STRIKE]would also be[/STRIKE] are [STRIKE]subject to allotment of[/STRIKE] are liable to receive marks under the Marking Scheme. [STRIKE]Also,[/STRIKE] For the safety of [STRIKE]the public[/STRIKE] all, please do not commit this crime.

See above.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top