Talking about Yosemite nation park. Yosemite national park is a national park located

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

Yosemite national park is a national park located in Mariposa , Tuolumne, California, USA. It has 3.081 km2 area and toward the west of the slope of a mountain ranges Sierra Nevada. Yosemite has over 3 million traveler in each year. the majority of traveler only to visit in Yosemite Valley.
Yosemite is famous on the world for the beautiful granite, high waterfalls...

 

[bhaisahab]

What is your question?

 

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

Sorry, I forgot. Could everyone check it, please?

 

[tedmc]

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Yosemite is world-famous [STRIKE]on the world[/STRIKE] for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] its beautiful granite cliffs and high waterfalls.

 

[SoothingDave]

Yosemite national park is a national park located in Mariposa , Tuolumne, California, USA.

This location doesn't make any sense. Usually it is "city, state, nation." There is some sort of hierarchy.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yosemite_National_Park

Checking Wikipedia, the park is located in Tuolumne, Mariposa and Madera counties in California.
You failed to mention one of the counties and made it look like Mariposa was a location within Tuolumne.

If you are going to name counties, you need to tell people they are counties.

 

[MikeNewYork]

All the words in "Yosemite National Park" should be capitalized. There is no reason to state that something called "Yosemite National Park" is a national park.