Technology is being used increasingly

maildor

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Can you please check this paragraph?

Technology is being used increasingly in the classroom rather than the traditional way of being taught with books and lectures. This has been an issue in dispute whether is increases student achievement or it is disrupt.

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Tarheel

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Can you please check this paragraph?

Technology is being used increasingly in the classroom What kind of technology? rather than the traditional way of teaching using books and lectures. There is disagreement about this, and whether it increases student achievement or not is in dispute.

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OK.
 
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emsr2d2

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I would change the opening word order to "Technology is increasingly being used in the classroom ..." or "Increasingly, technology is being used in the classroom". It avoids the awkwardness of "increasingly in the classroom".
 
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