[General] verb..to do smth.

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osman

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Hello, I am trying to compose a sentence. Do you think I should omit the colored "to" to make the sentence read natural?
Thanks in advance

"Efficient strategies are needed at the global level to incorporate firefighters into the forest management process and to make successful workforce planning for them."

 

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Hello, I am trying to compose a sentence. Do you think I should omit the colored "to" to make the sentence [STRIKE]read[/STRIKE] (sound) natural?
Thanks in advance.

Your sentence is unnatural. Try this:
"Efficient strategies are needed at the global level to incorporate firefighters into the forest management process and [STRIKE]to make successful[/STRIKE] for effective workforce planning for them."
 
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