alpacinou
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- Sep 30, 2019
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- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Emily carried the logs inside the house and put them in the fireplace. Pouring ethanol over the logs, she tossed a match onto them. Orange-blue flames rose with a faint whoosh. Outside, snow was cascading down as fire began to crackle. She grabbed her book and sat by the hearth. She rubbed the book over her smooth cheeks, inhaling its scent, turning the pages and enjoying their soothing rustle.
Emily had been drowning in a vortex of self-destruction when she realized no one was coming to her rescue. One afternoon, she grabbed all the heroin she had and flushed it down the toilet. Now the book became her heroin. The book. Staring into the fireplace, she smiled, letting the heat warm her cheeks. She'd been miserable for so long that she'd forgotten she could be something else too. She wondered if the heroin-high hazy life she'd left behind would one day come back to haunt her but for now she might as well grab all the joy she could while she could.
Emily carried the logs inside the house and put them in the fireplace. Pouring ethanol over the logs, she tossed a match onto them. Orange-blue flames rose with a faint whoosh. Outside, snow was cascading down as fire began to crackle. She grabbed her book and sat by the hearth. She rubbed the book over her smooth cheeks, inhaling its scent, turning the pages and enjoying their soothing rustle.
Emily had been drowning in a vortex of self-destruction when she realized no one was coming to her rescue. One afternoon, she grabbed all the heroin she had and flushed it down the toilet. Now the book became her heroin. The book. Staring into the fireplace, she smiled, letting the heat warm her cheeks. She'd been miserable for so long that she'd forgotten she could be something else too. She wondered if the heroin-high hazy life she'd left behind would one day come back to haunt her but for now she might as well grab all the joy she could while she could.