You guys should quick...,

[Silverobama]

One of the English club was canceled yesterday because the host is still in Germany. But some volunteers still wanted to meet up and chat, so one of the volunteers asked in the chat group to see if others wanted to join. He said if there was going to be enough people he would decide which place to meet. He suggested two places: Starbucks and another local coffee shop called Chagee.

A few hours later, there were more and more people wanted to come, then I told the volunteer “You guys should quick decide where to meet!” because those people who wanted to come still didn’t know where to meet while it was quite close to the club started.

Is the italic sentence natural?

 

[tedmc]

One of the Our club meeting was canceled yesterday because the host is still in Germany. But some volunteers still wanted to meet up and chat, so one of the volunteers asked in the chat group to see if others wanted to join. He said if there was going to be enough people he would decide which place to meet (on the venue). He suggested two places: Starbucks and another local coffee shop called Chagee.

A few hours later, there were more and more people wanted to come. Then I told the volunteer,“You guys should quickly decide where to meet!”, because those people who wanted to come (attend) still didn’t know where to meet while it was quite close to the club started meeting.

Is the italic sentence natural?

 

[emsr2d2]

One of the our English club meetings was canceled yesterday because the host is still in Germany. But However, some volunteers still wanted to meet up and chat, so one of the volunteers them asked put a message in the chat group to see if others anyone else wanted to join. He said that if there was going to be enough people were interested, he would decide which place where to meet. He suggested two places local coffee shops: Starbucks and another local coffee shop called Chagee.

A few hours later, there were more and more people had said they wanted to come, then so I told the volunteer “You guys should quick decide quickly where to meet and let everyone know!” because those people who wanted to come still didn’t know where to meet while it was quite close to the club started.

Is the italic sentence natural?